Um, yes, I realize this comment is a bit late (SGA newbie here), but I had to tell you this is amazing. I loved both parts and I think you nailed these characters' voices.
I love this fragmentary writing style and it worked really really well here, underlining tension and flow. Impressive.
Also, that last part, about John teaching Rodney to fly the Jumper, killed me. See, McShep is my number one OTP, but it's closely followed by John/Atlantis+Atlantean technology and you managed to combine them. So yeah, you rock.
And finally, I've friended you, hope you don't mind. *waves*
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Um, yes, I realize this comment is a bit late (SGA newbie here), but I had to tell you this is amazing. I loved both parts and I think you nailed these characters' voices.
I love this fragmentary writing style and it worked really really well here, underlining tension and flow. Impressive.
Also, that last part, about John teaching Rodney to fly the Jumper, killed me. See, McShep is my number one OTP, but it's closely followed by John/Atlantis+Atlantean technology and you managed to combine them. So yeah, you rock.
And finally, I've friended you, hope you don't mind. *waves*
O-kay, this was long. Sorry about that.