No--your criticism is great! It's a good exercise for me to really interrogate what I'm writing, because I can be very lazy, especially with fanfic. I have comments and questions in response to your comments and questions, and a lot of stuff to think about and work on, which is YAY! But I'm going to have to do it later, 'cause I also have to run. Damn RL. ;-)

But no, it's great, I appreciate it, and more once I've finished scary assignment/gotten books back to library/bought toilet paper, etc. *g*