I honestly dont think anyone has ever made me feel quite so much outright hatred and disgust whilst reading a story, the part where Elizabeth mentions the plan to introduce the chip to civillians had me digging my nails into my palms and biting my tongue because I was trying not to scream.
Your writing is always compelling but this dragged me in and by the end I was glued to my screen. Its only a story, but nothing has ever made me feel so much contempt for the inhabitants of the so called 'developed world' because this was scarily believable. Lets pray it never goes this far eh?
Thank you for posting.