ext_14457 ([identity profile] dancinguniverse.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] trinityofone 2006-05-01 11:24 pm (UTC)

Lovely, just like the first two parts, but I did catch one typo, I think:

a sudden, intense moment of recognizing it has his.

It as his, mayhaps?

But, lol. So fans influencing the creative process, much? These were quite good, and it was great to watch them unfold through the day.

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