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trinityofone ([personal profile] trinityofone) wrote2007-08-17 10:21 am

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Today's Team Angst story over at [livejournal.com profile] mcshep_match pulls off one of my favorite (and one of the hardest) storytelling tricks: it manages to find some real, genuine hilarity inside a brutally angsty, brilliantly executed premise. In Rock, Paper (No Scissors), John and Rodney are locked in an alien jail and can only communicate through notes snuck past the guards. The author has John and Rodney's voices DOWN, and both of them are their wonderfully snarky and witty selves even in the face of horrible danger, and in the face of what's happening between them. Even better, the author repeatedly finds way to reinterpret the theme of "correspondence" beyond the original premise, like a composer producing beautiful variations; the resulting story is so smart, so clever, so funny AND heart-wrenching, it leaves me in awe every time I read it.

Do you like me? Check one.
__ Prison sucks
__ My hand hurts

Your best friend forever,
John


I don't know about the rest of you, but I'm enthusiastically checking the "This story is awesome and made of win" box.

Go read Rock, Paper (No Scissors) and check it yourself!

[identity profile] sisterofdream.livejournal.com 2007-08-17 05:23 pm (UTC)(link)
That may be the single greatest fictional note I have ever seen.

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_inbetween_/ 2007-08-17 06:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Did you ever consider going into politics? Why hasn't advertising picked you up yet!


I still think Angst will win.

[identity profile] bibliotech.livejournal.com 2007-08-17 06:42 pm (UTC)(link)
That story had me laughing out loud in parts. To be able to manage that and still be angsty is just remarkable.

[identity profile] nameitlater.livejournal.com 2007-08-18 04:41 am (UTC)(link)
I agree wholeheartedly! I read this fic before I saw your post and it is made of win!

I'm entirely smitten with Rodney's concept of John's emo high school poetry and John trying to impress Rodney with his geeky knowledge. *sighs happily*