I love it so so much!! I'm totally intruiged by the idea, it's one of those things that you hear once and then it makes total sense and you wonder why you, or anyone else, never thought of it before. I hate comments that tell the author that the reader can't wait for more, but right now I feel like a greedy bibliovore version of the cookie monster, I just want to seeeeee how this one will play out! *bouncing*
I especially liked how you managed to keep them all exactely in character. I love Gene and Alex is okay, too, but this made me realise just how much I miss Sam and his cool, calm way of thinking because he's right there, on the page. It's funny, too, I laughed more than one would think, given the events of the story.
Can quell my excitement... proper LoM fic!! *runs around, squeeling like David Hewlett*
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Date: 2008-04-18 07:18 pm (UTC)I especially liked how you managed to keep them all exactely in character. I love Gene and Alex is okay, too, but this made me realise just how much I miss Sam and his cool, calm way of thinking because he's right there, on the page. It's funny, too, I laughed more than one would think, given the events of the story.
Can quell my excitement... proper LoM fic!! *runs around, squeeling like David Hewlett*