Oh yay! These were both really nice pieces. I'm not incredibly fond of the story-told-in-drabbles structure, but you really made it work, and wow, even dealt with some of my own personal Trinity issues in the process. And the ending, with John giving Rodney flying lessons, such a great way to resolve that trust issue -- I'd love to see that expanded on by itself, actually, if the mood strikes you.
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Date: 2005-08-29 03:12 pm (UTC)