Such a neat idea for a fic! I really love how you wrote it and how all concluded so beautifully! Nicely done!
"It’s kind of annoying that all his carefully won control—his skill, his finesse—is gone. On the other hand, his refractory time is amazing." - Haha, that'd drive Dean crazy! I'm sure he'd make do though *grin*
- All your descriptions of Dean’s first blowjob, his first time with Cas, and being taken by Cas…amazing! I love the beauty of the language and how smooth it all is! Like poetry!
"He says, “I make you whole.”" - Ahhhhhhhhh, holy crap! Life is complete! *swoons* Love this! Perfect closer!
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Date: 2009-09-02 05:05 am (UTC)"It’s kind of annoying that all his carefully won control—his skill, his finesse—is gone. On the other hand, his refractory time is amazing."
- Haha, that'd drive Dean crazy! I'm sure he'd make do though *grin*
- All your descriptions of Dean’s first blowjob, his first time with Cas, and being taken by Cas…amazing! I love the beauty of the language and how smooth it all is! Like poetry!
"He says, “I make you whole.”"
- Ahhhhhhhhh, holy crap! Life is complete! *swoons* Love this! Perfect closer!