Wow. That was great. You're a great writer. The way you didn't really describe the aliens made it extra creepy, as it forces the reader to imagine the worst. The tone was perfect. And the falseness of the house. Fabulous.
Although, now I'm wondering how they're going to get home! Without their gear, they don't have an IDC.
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Date: 2005-09-12 04:50 am (UTC)Although, now I'm wondering how they're going to get home! Without their gear, they don't have an IDC.