Omfg. Yes, this is scorching hot, but also so much more than I expected. The little glimpses into John's mind just blew me away. The angst, the guilt, the inner turmoil! It's all there.
(An unplanned sin is still that: a sin.) The beauty of it is, he can still hear himself saying, is that man is free to choose. “I’m--” Good, he starts to say. “--Fine. That sentence killed me.
“That was a ‘Bless you, my son,’ kind of thing, right?” Ahahahaha. Oh, Rodney.
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Date: 2005-12-02 04:33 pm (UTC)The little glimpses into John's mind just blew me away. The angst, the guilt, the inner turmoil! It's all there.
(An unplanned sin is still that: a sin.)
The beauty of it is, he can still hear himself saying, is that man is free to choose.
“I’m--” Good, he starts to say. “--Fine. That sentence killed me.
“That was a ‘Bless you, my son,’ kind of thing, right?”
Ahahahaha. Oh, Rodney.