Again, with "Inhibited"--which, BTW, I think is a lot closer to accomplishing what I wanted it to accomplish than "Horses"--I think the problem was that a lot of people didn't know what was going on. Like, I should have put a sign up at the end: CHAYA TOOK JOHN'S INHIBITIONS! AND THEN SHE PUT THEM BACK!!! ALSO, THE TITLE? IT IS A CLUE! Except that would be lame.
I am really looking forward to your commentary. (And I should really do some myself since I promised, huh?)
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Date: 2005-12-18 07:15 pm (UTC)I am really looking forward to your commentary. (And I should really do some myself since I promised, huh?)