It had looked like this, he thought: exactly, not-at-all like this.
That line made me breathless. And of course, the ending, I can't say more than everyone else has already said. John's breath and the wind. The hug. The picture that stayed in my mind because you kept it there.
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Date: 2006-01-18 05:46 pm (UTC)It had looked like this, he thought: exactly, not-at-all like this.
That line made me breathless. And of course, the ending, I can't say more than everyone else has already said. John's breath and the wind. The hug. The picture that stayed in my mind because you kept it there.
Wow.