I started this thinking it would be a cute, fun story, which it is, but it's so much more than that too. I love the way you weaved in the things from the show, John firing Sumner, Ford ended up with The Lost Boys. And even though this is a very different career than the one John ends up with in the show, I feel like you really captured the way I see him, with all his presence and charm and the way he kind of manipulates things to get his way, though without any real malice.
Hee. In summary, I love it! ☺
This was my favorite line:
Someone was running a sprinkler, late at night, water skish skishing across the sunburnt grass. Rodney stepped into the gutter, avoiding the spray; John walked right through.
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Date: 2006-03-13 09:04 pm (UTC)I started this thinking it would be a cute, fun story, which it is, but it's so much more than that too. I love the way you weaved in the things from the show, John firing Sumner, Ford ended up with The Lost Boys. And even though this is a very different career than the one John ends up with in the show, I feel like you really captured the way I see him, with all his presence and charm and the way he kind of manipulates things to get his way, though without any real malice.
Hee. In summary, I love it! ☺
This was my favorite line:
Someone was running a sprinkler, late at night, water skish skishing across the sunburnt grass. Rodney stepped into the gutter, avoiding the spray; John walked right through.