Yay! Jenn's story and yours were the only ones I was pretty sure about.
Yours because of the written-out-in-words numbers and hours/minutes/seconds variation, which is kinda strange, but it really accentuated the urgent and fragmentary feel throughout the story.
John tastes familiar—reassuring until Rodney realizes that what he's tasting is his own brand of toothpaste. I love this line.
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Date: 2006-04-03 05:28 pm (UTC)Yours because of the written-out-in-words numbers and hours/minutes/seconds variation, which is kinda strange, but it really accentuated the urgent and fragmentary feel throughout the story.
John tastes familiar—reassuring until Rodney realizes that what he's tasting is his own brand of toothpaste. I love this line.