Ooh, I like what you've done to your remix story (and aw, thanks so much for the nod). It feels so urgent, you're right - that desperation is underlined by the countdown, and it's lovely. I can't really speak to it standing on its own because I'd read Auburn's story before, but basically, I'm happy to be blamed :-)
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Date: 2006-04-04 12:02 am (UTC)