Wow... like many other commentators, I had to read this a couple times to get it. Wonderful subtle writing! Loved this look at a John I've never thought of before. Him as an incubus is a new one for me, and you pulled it off so well.
Your descriptions were lyrical and flowed like magic. Loved that final scene at the end with mirror. Rodney seeing him for who he was and just loving him. Ah the sweetness... :)
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Date: 2011-04-30 10:29 pm (UTC)Your descriptions were lyrical and flowed like magic. Loved that final scene at the end with mirror. Rodney seeing him for who he was and just loving him. Ah the sweetness... :)