Every time I think you've gone and screwed up John's life and background enough, you'll find a new twist. This is wonderful, from the initial doubt with Chaya that gets stronger with the ancient to the foreshadowing of memory and John's utter ruthlessness.
And i love the way the collage and the story really do fit perfectly.
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Date: 2006-05-04 04:03 pm (UTC)And i love the way the collage and the story really do fit perfectly.
thank you!!!